From d04b91c7f9ccd223979370401f9fffe30d79efd4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: joegibb <joe.gibb@education.gov.uk>
Date: Thu, 28 Nov 2024 07:59:53 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] respond to comments

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 .../explore-subjects/english/_article.html.erb       |  2 +-
 .../explore-subjects/geography/_article.html.erb     |  2 +-
 .../explore-subjects/history/_article.html.erb       |  2 +-
 .../explore-subjects/languages/_article.html.erb     | 12 ++++++------
 .../explore-subjects/music/_article.html.erb         |  2 +-
 5 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/english/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/english/_article.html.erb
index d26193f7f7..92ce358337 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/english/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/english/_article.html.erb
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
       <li>giving short speeches and presentations</li>
       <li>rehearsing and performing play scripts and poems</li>
     </ul>
-    <p>Explore what teaching key stage 3 English would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/english-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
+    <p>Explore what teaching a key stage 3 English lesson would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/english-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
     <p>Skills you'll cover when you teach 14 to 16 year olds (key stage 4) include:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>understanding and evaluating texts </li>
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/geography/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/geography/_article.html.erb
index 0957014fef..6215a3a1e4 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/geography/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/geography/_article.html.erb
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
       <li>consolidating knowledge of the world's major countries</li>
       <li>understanding geographical similarities and differences between locations</li>
       <li>exploring physical geography such as rocks, weathering and climate</li>
-      <li>investigating human geography such as population, urban development and economy</li>
+      <li>investigating human geography such as population, urban development and economic activity</li>
       <li>understanding how human and physical processes can change landscapes</li>
       <li>building on skills using maps, globes and aerial photographs</li>
     </ul>
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/history/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/history/_article.html.erb
index 6fada90bd5..9cf047f61a 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/history/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/history/_article.html.erb
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
       <li>developing an awareness of why people, events and developments have been given historical significance</li>
       <li>creating structured accounts using evidence</li>
     </ul>
-    <p>Explore what teaching key stage 3 history lesson would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/history-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
+    <p>Explore what teaching a key stage 3 history lesson would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/history-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
     <p>At A level and AS level (key stage 5), you’ll help pupils develop further knowledge and skills in:</p>
     <ul>
       <li>acquiring an understanding of the nature of historical study</li>
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/languages/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/languages/_article.html.erb
index bdd38e6513..3d7fbe7090 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/languages/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/languages/_article.html.erb
@@ -45,12 +45,12 @@
       <li>understanding and responding to written language</li>
       <li>communicating in writing</li>
     </ul>
-        <p>Explore what teaching modern language lessons would be like at key stage 3:</p>
-        <ul>
-          <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/french-secondary-ks3-l/units">French lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
-          <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/german-secondary-ks3-l/units">German lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
-          <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/spanish-secondary-ks3-l/units">Spanish lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
-        </ul>
+      <p>Explore what teaching modern language lessons would be like at key stage 3:</p>
+    <ul>
+      <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/french-secondary-ks3-l/units">French lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
+      <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/german-secondary-ks3-l/units">German lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
+      <li><a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/spanish-secondary-ks3-l/units">Spanish lessons at the Oak National Academy website</a></li>
+    </ul>
     <p>At A level and AS level (key stage 5), you’ll help pupils develop a deeper knowledge and understanding of:</p>
       <ul>
         <li>the society and culture, past and present, of the country or countries where the language is spoken</li>
diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/music/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/music/_article.html.erb
index fbfa0ab88e..3d1942274c 100644
--- a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/music/_article.html.erb
+++ b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/explore-subjects/music/_article.html.erb
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
       <li>listen to a wide range of composers and musicians</li>
       <li>develop a deeper understanding of music and its history</li>
     </ul>
-        <p>Explore what teaching key stage 3 music would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/music-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
+        <p>Explore what teaching a key stage 3 music lesson would be like by visiting the <a href="https://www.thenational.academy/teachers/programmes/music-secondary-ks3/units">Oak National Academy website</a>.</p>
     <p>When you teach 14 to 16 year olds (key stage 4), pupils can study music through GCSE, vocational and technical qualifications or through graded music exams, developing a deeper understanding of the subject.</p>
     <p>Skills you'll cover when you teach GCSE music could include:</p>
     <ul>