Update Unity activation instructions for clarity #491
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WalkthroughThe documentation for Unity activation methods has been comprehensively revised to improve clarity and user guidance. The changes focus on restructuring the content to provide more precise instructions for license activation, including a new "Mental Model" section that outlines the steps for activating a license locally and adding it to GitHub. The document now offers clearer distinctions between free and paid Unity license types and includes a visual reference with an image import for the Unity Hub Preferences Licenses Add Button. Changes
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7-18: LGTM! Well-structured guide for license selection.The categorization is clear and the navigation links are helpful. Consider adding anchor links for all referenced sections to maintain consistency.
33-71: Well-documented setup instructions with clear platform-specific details.The instructions are comprehensive and the visual aid is helpful. Consider adding alt text that includes more descriptive details about what users should look for in the UI, to improve accessibility.
- alt="Unity Hub Preferences Licenses Add Button" + alt="Unity Hub interface showing the Preferences window with the Licenses tab selected and the Add button highlighted"
73-79: Ensure consistent formatting in the secrets list.The content is accurate, but the formatting could be more consistent. Consider adjusting the indentation and bullet points for better readability.
Create the following secrets: - - **`UNITY_LICENSE`**: Copy and paste the contents of your `.ulf` license file. - - **`UNITY_EMAIL`**: Enter the email address associated with your Unity account. - - **`UNITY_PASSWORD`**: Enter the password for your Unity account. + - **`UNITY_LICENSE`**: Copy and paste the contents of your `.ulf` license file + - **`UNITY_EMAIL`**: Enter the email address associated with your Unity account + - **`UNITY_PASSWORD`**: Enter the password for your Unity account🧰 Tools
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1-5: LGTM! Clear and concise introduction.The image import is properly structured, and the introduction has been simplified effectively.
26-32: Excellent addition of the mental model section!The two-step process clearly outlines what users need to do and why, making the activation process more understandable.
The option is not present on Unity Hub on macOS. I don't think it is necessary to do this step for personal licenses
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This pull request includes updates to the Unity activation documentation to improve clarity and provide more detailed instructions. The changes include rephrasing for better readability, adding new sections, and including an image to guide users through the activation process.
Documentation improvements:
docs/03-github/02-activation.mdx: Rephrased the activation instructions for clarity and introduced a new section on choosing the right activation method.docs/03-github/02-activation.mdx: Added a detailed step-by-step guide for setting up a Unity license, including new subsections and an image to assist users.Closes #469
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