Explaining Cookbook entires a bit more consisely.

fennecs.tech/cookbook/KillBill.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ outline: [2, 3]
 # Paying a Visit to Old Friends
 
 ::: info :neofox_floof_mug: MMMH, REAL CODE
-This **RUNS**! *Playful premises aside*, this is a functioning showcase of **fenn**ecs features.
+This **RUNS**! *Playful premises aside*, this is a functioning showcase of **fenn**ecs principles.
 
 Get comfy, grab a cup of ~~Java~~ ~~CoffeeScript~~ ~~Visual J#~~ whatever, and get your paws dirty playing around in the code! It's good fun!
 
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ All `.csproj` and `.cs` files are [over here on Github!](https://github.com/thyg
 :::
 
 ### Premise
-To settle an old score, we need to get even with five ~~former friends~~ Entities...
+To settle an old score, we need to get even with five ~~former friends~~ Entities... we need to find those that wronged us, and wrong them right back in their face.
 
 We create the Entities and define the [Relation](../docs/Relation.md) (`struct Betrayed`) they have with us, and also ours (`struct Grudge`) with them. We include a plain [Component](../docs/Component.md) (`struct Location`) as useful data to everyone involved.
 
-Next, we query for the Relation, say hello, and ~~unalive~~ interact with the Entities in a [Query.For](../docs/Queries/Query.For.md).
+Next, we query for the Relation, say hello, and ~~unalive~~ interact with the Entities in a [Query.For](../docs/Queries/Query.For.md). This removes our `Grudge` for them.
 
 ### Implementation
 <<< ../../cookbook/KillBill.cs {cs:line-numbers}

fennecs.tech/cookbook/OneRing.md

@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@ outline: [2, 3]
 
 #  One Ring to Find Them
 
-:neofox_what: Sorry, work in progress! come back soon.
-
+::: warning :neofox_what: WHAT THE...
+Sorry, work in progress! come back soon.
+:::
 

fennecs.tech/cookbook/Tsubasa.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ outline: [2, 3]
 # Nankatsu High School Team's first Practice
 
 ::: info :neofox_floof_mug: MMMH, REAL CODE
-This **RUNS**! *Playful premises aside*, this is a functioning showcase of **fenn**ecs features.
+This **RUNS**! *Playful premises aside*, this is a functioning showcase of **fenn**ecs principles.
 
 Get comfy, grab a cup of ~~Java~~ ~~CoffeeScript~~ ~~Visual J#~~ whatever, and get your paws dirty playing around in the code! It's good fun!
 
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ All `.csproj` and `.cs` files are [over here on Github!](https://github.com/thyg
 :::
 
 ### Premise
-Japan's least coordinated soccer team tries to score a goal. They're just kids, all running after the ball at once. They have no ball control whatsoever. Only one of them is kind of a good shot, some kid named "Tsubasa".
+Japan's least coordinated soccer team tries to score a goal. They're just kids, all running after the ball at once. Only one of them is kind of a good shot, some kid named "Tsubasa"...
 
-We create a team of 11 Entities with a `Player` and `Name` Component, and a ball entity with a `Ball`. The match has been going on for a long time, so as soon as the only player with a `Talent` Component scores, the match ends with a golden goal.
+We create a team of 11 Entities with `Player`, `Name`, `Talent`, and `Position` [Components](../docs/Component.md), and a ball entity with a `Ball`.
 
-In our "game" loop, we get the current position of our ball Entity, and let each player Entity run after it. If they get close enough, they kick the ball to a new position if they have no talent; and finally when a player with the `Talent` component hits the ball, the game ends.
+In our "game" loop, we get the current position of our ball Entity, and let each player Entity run after it. If they get close enough, they kick the ball to a new position. As soon as the only player with a truthy `Talent` Component scores, the match ends with a golden goal.
 
 ### Implementation
 <<< ../../cookbook/Tsubasa.cs {cs:line-numbers}

fennecs.tech/cookbook/index.md

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 These examples are not best practices, nor good practices. _**They're practice.**_
 
 
-Use them as you gradually build an understanding and mental model of **fenn**ecs, and good habits will fall into place all on their own. Then, return to that overscoped game project of yours and get cooking!
+Use them as you gradually build an understanding and mental model of **fenn**ecs, and good habits will fall into place all on their own.
+
+Later, when you return to that overscoped game project of yours, you can get cooking *for real!*
 :::
 
 

fennecs.tech/index.md

@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@ hero:
   tagline: <em>... a tiny, tiny, high-energy ECS!</em>
   actions:
     - theme: brand
-      text: Read Docs!
+      text: Start Here!
       link: /docs/index
-    - theme: brand
-      text: Get Cooking!
+    - theme: alt
+      text: Cookbook
       link: /cookbook/
     - theme: alt
-      text: Github
+      text: GitHub
       link: https://github.com/thygrrr/fennecs
 
 features: