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 # Connect Your Azure Account for Eco Analysis
 
-This document describes the requirements for Spot Eco to provide an estimated cost savings analysis. The procedure below describes the connection process. If you want a more detailed explanation of Spot's roles and permissions, please review our [access roles and permissions page](eco/azure-tutorials/access-roles-read-only). 
+This document describes the requirements for Spot Eco to provide an estimated cost savings analysis. The procedure below describes the connection process. For a more detailed explanation of Spot's roles and permissions, please review our [access roles and permissions page](eco/azure-tutorials/access-roles-read-only). 
 
 The steps below apply to the following account/agreement types:
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@ The steps below apply to the following account/agreement types:
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Review [read-only permissions](eco/azure-tutorials/access-roles-read-only) required for Eco Cost Specialist team.
-- The Azure user performing these steps must be a Global Administrator with [elevated access](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/role-based-access-control/elevate-access-global-admin#elevate-access-for-a-global-administrator) and access to the relevant Management Group(s) or Subscription(s).
-- The Azure user performing this step must be an Enterprise Administrator (EA) or Billing account owner (MCA).
+- The Azure user must be a Global Administrator with [elevated access](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/role-based-access-control/elevate-access-global-admin#elevate-access-for-a-global-administrator) and access to the relevant Management Group(s) or Subscription(s).
+- The Azure user must be an Enterprise Administrator (EA) or Billing account owner (MCA).
 - A Member Account only. The account cannot be a guest user account.
 - A registered [Spot account](https://console.spotinst.com/spt/auth/signUp).
 
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 <img width="623" alt="connect-azure-3" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/6d609735-1712-4f4d-9157-406c104d6a6b"> 
 
 ### Connect Manually 
-While the automated process is much easier and preferred by most, the manual process allows for adherence to higher security requirements when needed. 
 
-<img width="832" alt="connect-azure-4" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/8bfd6aab-288b-44c5-9705-fa563b16dcbc">
+The manual process allows for adherence to higher security requirements when needed. 
 
-1. Navigate to Azure’s Microsoft Entra ID service.  
-2. Click **App registration** and click **New Registration**. 
-3. Give the application a new name (no redirect URI needed). 
+1. Go to Azure’s Microsoft Entra ID service.  
+2. Click **App registration** and click **New Registration**. **Note**: This applies to EA, MCA, PAYG. 
+3. Enter a name for the application (no redirect URI needed). 
 
 ![connect-azure-5](https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/5c57c149-496f-4785-8943-a059a62951de)
 
-4. In the app registration you just created, click Certificates and Secrets, and create a new client secret. Note: Copy the Secret Key. The key will not appear again after you leave the Key settings. 
+4. In the app registration you just created, click **Certificates and Secrets**, and create a new client secret. **Note**: Copy the Secret Key. The key will not appear again after you leave the Key settings. 
 
 ![connect-azure-6](https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/0d1d2353-5ed1-465f-a00f-cab617a05e16)
 
 #### Assign the Enrollment Reader  
 
-Assigning the Enrollment Reader applies to Enterprise Agreement Only. Assign the Enrollment Reader role to the registered application. 
+**This Assigning the Enrollment Reader analysis stage applies to Enterprise Agreement Only**. Assign the Enrollment Reader role to the registered application. 
 
-The Enrollment Reader Role can only be applied using a Microsoft API. Learn how to [add the role using an API call](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/cost-management-billing/manage/assign-roles-azure-service-principals#assign-enrollment-account-role-permission-to-the-spn) in the Microsoft documentation. 
+The Enrollment Reader Role can only be applied using a Microsoft API. Learn how to [add the role using an API call](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/cost-management-billing/manage/assign-roles-azure-service-principals#assign-enrollment-account-role-permission-to-the-spn). 
 
 |       Role             |                                                                                                                                                Actions allowed                                                                                                                                            |               Role definition ID          |   |
 |------------------------|:---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------:|:-----------------------------------------:|---|
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 #### Add the Billing Account Reader Role 
 
-Adding the Billing Account Reader Role applies only to Microsoft Customer Agreements. Add the Billing Account Reader Role to the registered application by completing the following steps:  
+**This Adding the Billing Account Reader Role analysis stage applies only to Microsoft Customer Agreements**. Add the Billing Account Reader Role to the registered application:  
 
-1. Click the **Cost Management + Billing page** and select the billing account you would like to connect. 
+1. Click the **Cost Management + Billing page** and select the billing account you want to connect. 
 
 <img width="1976" alt="connect-azure-7 1" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/72086fad-f0e8-497d-8f9b-1399064727e9">
 
 <img width="1860" alt="connect-azure-7 2" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/483de2b3-3bff-4e26-a78b-e680946318ad">
 
-2. Select the Access Control (IAM) and then add the Billing Account Reader access to the app registration. 
+2. Select the **Access Control (IAM)** and then add the Billing Account Reader access to the app registration. 
 
 ![connect-azure-8](https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/01880d93-b600-4612-ba73-2f43de72adbe)
 
 #### Assign the Cost Management Reader Role 
 
-Assign the Cost Management Reader role to the registered application on the subscriptions you would like to be managed. 
-
-Select the Management Groups or Subscriptions(s) you would like Eco Azure to purchase reservations on.  
+**This Assign the Cost Management Reader Role analysis stage applies to PAYG only**. 
+
+Assign the Cost Management Reader role to the registered application on the subscriptions you want to manage.
+
+Select the Management Groups or Subscriptions(s) on which you want Eco Azure to purchase reservations.  
 
-1. In the left menu, select **Access Control (IAM)**.  
-2. Click **Add / Add role assignment**.  
-3. Search for and select **Cost Management Reader**.  
-4. Click **Next** in the lower left.  
-5. Click **+ Select Members**.  
-6. In the right pane, search for and select the registered application. 
+1. In the left menu, select **Access Control (IAM) > Add / Add role assignment**.  
+2. Search for and select **Cost Management Reader > Next** in the bottom left. 
+3. Click **+ Select Members**. 
+4. In the right pane, search for and select the registered application.  
 
 #### Assign the Reservation Reader 
 
+**Assigning the Reservation Reader applies to PAYG users only**.
+
 Assign the Reservation Reader role to the registered application. 
 
 1. Click the **Reservations** page. 
 2. Click **Role assignments** and then **Add / Add role assignment**.  
 
 <img width="1661" alt="connect-azure-9" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/679242ae-82de-4f4a-91ea-358a4c664a24">
 
-3. Search for and select **Reservation Reader**.  
-4. Click **Next** on the lower left.  
-5. Click **+ Select Members**.  
-6. In the right pane, search for and select the Eco Azure Registered application. 
-7. Click **Review + Assign** in the lower left. 
+3. Search for and select **Reservation Reader > Next > + Select Members**. 
+4. In the right pane, search for and select the Eco Azure Registered application. 
+5. Click **Review + Assign** in the bottom left.  
 
 #### Add the App Registration Details 
 
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 <img width="797" alt="connect-azure-10" src="https://github.com/spotinst/help/assets/106514736/0ac3bb37-86f4-4ff7-847e-a6a0c123c3fc">
 
 If you need assistance, read our [troubleshooting guide](https://docs.spot.io/eco/troubleshooting/azure-faq). Additionally, the Eco Azure team can assist with setting up the registered application and transferring the application credentials. Contact https://spot.io/contact/ for further information. 
-
-Let your account team know when you have completed the steps above.
-
-A detailed cost savings analysis will be available within 5 business days.
 
-In the meantime, learn [how Eco works](eco/azure-tutorials/) to provide significant savings on your cloud spend.