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DFE-Digital · Jan 7, 2025 · e1ece66 · e1ece66
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diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/_categories.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/_categories.html.erb
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           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:
             OpenStruct.new(
               title: "Why become a teacher",
-              description: "Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference to exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.",
+              description: "Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference from day 1, to exploring your creativity and benefitting from a competitive salary and generous holidays.",
               path: "/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/why-teach",
             )) %>
           <%= render Categories::CardComponent.new(heading_tag: "h2", card:

diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/why-teach.md b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/why-teach.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Why become a teacher
 description: |- 
-  Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference to exploring your creativity, holidays, pay, and much more.
+  Explore the many reasons why you should become a teacher in England. From making a difference from day 1, to exploring your creativity and benefitting from a competitive salary and generous holidays.
 layout: "layouts/minimal"
 colour: pastel yellow-yellow
 image: "static/images/content/hero-images/0036.jpg"

diff --git a/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/why-teach/_article.html.erb b/app/views/content/life-as-a-teacher/teaching-as-a-career/why-teach/_article.html.erb
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_chelsea' %></p>
 
-    <p>Your impact won’t be limited to your pupils. You’ll have opportunities to make a difference to your school, colleagues, and local community.</p>
+    <p>Your impact will not be limited to your pupils. You’ll have opportunities to make a difference to your school, colleagues, and local community.</p>
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_shaniqua' %></p>
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
     <h2 class="heading--box-blue">Use skills from your degree or previous career</h2>
 
-    <p>Teaching provides you with a great environment to use the skills and knowledge you’ve developed during a degree or a previous career. You’ll share your passion with your pupils and continue to learn as you teach.</p>
+    <p>Teaching provides you with a great environment to use the skills and knowledge you’ve developed during a degree or a previous career. You’ll share your passion with your pupils and continue to learn as you teach. Find out more about <a href="/life-as-a-teacher/change-careers">changing careers to become a teacher</a>.</p>
 
     <p><%= render 'content/shared/quotes/quote_why_teach_jack' %></p>