revised Pananggaran

xml/DHARMA_INSIDENKPananggaran.xml

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         fortnight, Mavulu (of the 6-day cycle), Pon (of the 5-day cycle), Monday
         <supplied reason="explanation">i.e., on 15 August 869 CE</supplied>.</p>
         <p n="4-11">That was when the Lady priestess of Paḍaṅ North, <supplied reason="explanation">called</supplied> <foreign>pu</foreign> Manoharī, mother of the Lord of Padələgan, child of the deified ancestor at Taṅar, demarcated the dam of Panaṅgaran, for the watering of the fields of the sanctuary at Triple Leaf. The temple manager at the time, <foreign>ḍaṅ ācārya</foreign> Vimaleśvara, native of Muṅgv Antan, district Tira, was given the village of Panaṅgaran. The arrangement was 4 <foreign>māṣa</foreign>s of gold.<note>Or is the meaning: <q>The temple manager at the time was <foreign>ḍaṅ ācārya</foreign> Vimaleśvara, native of Muṅgv Antan, district Tira. The village of Panaṅgaran was given as arrangement 4 <foreign>māṣa</foreign>s of gold</q>?</note></p>
-        <p n="12-14">Now should the bridge <supplied reason="explanation">? <foreign>vuattan</foreign></supplied> be obstructed, it is unkind to himself and to his children <supplied reason="subaudible">as well as</supplied> grandchildren.</p>
+        <p n="12-14">Now should the bridge <supplied reason="explanation">? <foreign>vuattan</foreign></supplied> be obstructed, it is his unkindness to himself and to his children <supplied reason="subaudible">as well as</supplied> grandchildren.</p>
         <p n="14">Written by <foreign>saṅ</foreign> Pucaṅan.</p>
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-           <p>First edited in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+TjahjonoPrasodjo2003_01"/></bibl>, edited again, with more errors, in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+al2007_01"/></bibl> (whence reproduced in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+al2015_01"/></bibl>). Re-redited here by Arlo Griffiths from direct inspection of the stone and photographs.</p>
+           <p>First edited in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+TjahjonoPrasodjo2003_01"/></bibl>; edited again, with more errors, in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+al2007_01"/></bibl> (whence reproduced in <bibl><ptr target="bib:RiboetDarmosoetopo+al2015_01"/></bibl>). Re-redited here by Arlo Griffiths from direct inspection of the stone and photographs.</p>
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